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Reality check

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read the full poem [pdf - italian and english]

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he had told me he would and, yes he did it! now here you can find the
italian reading of reality check [mp3 in a .zip file]
by :iconaguaplano:
he made my words so beautiful and the soundtrack he chose made everything even more perfect! thank you so much!! :heart:
:whisper: women, beware his voice! :giggle:

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holy crap, i couldn't find the right category where to post this. it should be in 'visual poetry' but it doesn't exist anymore. pfff.
edit: thanks =enui for pointing out the existence of the visual poetry category! :flirty: it's still there! :dance:

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made with photoshop.

tree and hand from stock.xchng
textures from stock.xchng and *nighty-stock
some brushes from *veredgf others... i don't know :crazy:


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edit: i changed the font of the upper part, i didn't like it that way.
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as i employed a detective :sherlock: to find out that you were spying on my poems, this is what you get:

I really love this poem, and I am not only saying this because we're almost pocket friends, 'cause pocket friends tell each other the truth (I guess). The flow of the words, the spacing between them and the sound it makes (and I don't even speak Italian) remind me of one of my favourite poems of all time, entitled Un Coup de Dés jamais n'abolira l'hasard by Mallarmé (google it). And that say a lot I think. Yours is a poem to read out loud, and it has a flow that works like magic. I am quite frustrated now that you're so good on anything, and I have to admit, I would even be envious if we weren't almost pocket friends :blush:
Maybe it somehow could be made into song, but I'm not sure if it wouldn't disturb the flow of it just read aloud :hmm:

Bacaaaana! :thumbsup: